So far, so good

Intro:

Sorry to disturb you,
Sorry for rushing in.
But if ever you
doing what you do
could spare a minute or two:
Its this little tune
I'd like to croon
to tell you how I feel about you…..

Verse 1:
There's a certain kind of magic about you.
This much I know is true.
You bewitch, you bother and bewilder me
and I don't know how you do.
Maybe it's the way you look at me
or maybe just the way you ask.
Or maybe it is just you smiling knowingly
whenever I am trying to wear a mask.

Chorus:
You trap me, snap me, tease me,
you do hear me, cheer me and please me.
And though you take where dare to go I never would:
Still you brought me so far.
So good!

Verse 2:
Sometimes I thought I wasn't strong enough.
The goals you set at times seemed bloody tough.
But otherwise the chance of loosing chance on thee
would be by any means too rough.
I tried the trick of dropping to my knee
The effect on you was less than close to naught.
I tried to be someone quite far above of me
It didn't bring to where I wished to be brought
cause still:

Chorus:
You trap me, snap me, tease me,
You do hear me, cheer me and please me.
And though you take were dare to go I never would s
till you brought me so far.
So good!

Bridge (spoken over piano harmonizing melody of verse):
I know darn well what you are doing for me.
And I realize you want me to be me.
I'm workin' on it.
The heck of it.
What I'm trying to do above of that
is to get to a point where you again look at me
the way you did when I could

Trap you, snap you, tease you.
Hear you, cheer you and please you.
Take you to dare where to go you never would.
To bring you so far.
So good.

Critics report to that song:
"Nice tune. But doesn't the guy realize that he's using way too much words to point out that he simply loves that girl for bringing out the best in him and he wants to give her the same in return?"